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		<title>By: Beth Partin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Beth Partin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Oct 2008 22:02:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carolyn,

yeah, haibuns are fun to write, especially since I haven&#039;t read up much on the form. I just do it the way I want to. One of these days I&#039;ll have to start revising them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carolyn,</p>
<p>yeah, haibuns are fun to write, especially since I haven&#8217;t read up much on the form. I just do it the way I want to. One of these days I&#8217;ll have to start revising them.</p>
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		<title>By: Carolyn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carolyn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Oct 2008 22:01:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Beth,  What fun to come across this.  A poetic souvenir of our day. I think your writing perfectly captured the experience.   A bit like a glimpsed memory--only a communal one!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Beth,  What fun to come across this.  A poetic souvenir of our day. I think your writing perfectly captured the experience.   A bit like a glimpsed memory&#8211;only a communal one!</p>
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		<title>By: Beth Partin</title>
		<link>http://bethpartin.com/monhaibun-teacher/comment-page-1/#comment-181</link>
		<dc:creator>Beth Partin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Oct 2008 16:39:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Bernard,

I have worked in publishing for twenty years now, and there are people who just want to close off part of the world to justify what they are doing. That sounds harsh, but it&#039;s true. I know a guy who&#039;s a well-known experimental writer/VJ who once said that people just shouldn&#039;t write psychological novels anymore--all novels should be experimental because of all the changes in culture and technology. I had another guy express chagrin at poets because he was writing a novel and thought he should get more credit for writing more words than poets. (If that&#039;s the standard, then Sidney Sheldon is a genius.)

Do whatever the hell you want with poetry. 

This teacher probably didn&#039;t want to deal with rhyme because it&#039;s very hard to write a good rhyming poem.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bernard,</p>
<p>I have worked in publishing for twenty years now, and there are people who just want to close off part of the world to justify what they are doing. That sounds harsh, but it&#8217;s true. I know a guy who&#8217;s a well-known experimental writer/VJ who once said that people just shouldn&#8217;t write psychological novels anymore&#8211;all novels should be experimental because of all the changes in culture and technology. I had another guy express chagrin at poets because he was writing a novel and thought he should get more credit for writing more words than poets. (If that&#8217;s the standard, then Sidney Sheldon is a genius.)</p>
<p>Do whatever the hell you want with poetry. </p>
<p>This teacher probably didn&#8217;t want to deal with rhyme because it&#8217;s very hard to write a good rhyming poem.</p>
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		<title>By: BernardL</title>
		<link>http://bethpartin.com/monhaibun-teacher/comment-page-1/#comment-180</link>
		<dc:creator>BernardL</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Oct 2008 16:30:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Free form Xanadu message poems were his thing, and if one of us tried to sneak in a rhyme (usually me), we were applying for work with Hallmark. I asked him if there was some reason free form couldn&#039;t have rhyming words without counting meter and accent. He said that isn&#039;t done. I&#039;ve been doing it ever since. My wife likes them. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Free form Xanadu message poems were his thing, and if one of us tried to sneak in a rhyme (usually me), we were applying for work with Hallmark. I asked him if there was some reason free form couldn&#8217;t have rhyming words without counting meter and accent. He said that isn&#8217;t done. I&#8217;ve been doing it ever since. My wife likes them. <img src='http://bethpartin.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Beth Partin</title>
		<link>http://bethpartin.com/monhaibun-teacher/comment-page-1/#comment-177</link>
		<dc:creator>Beth Partin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Oct 2008 17:04:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sacred in that it should be treated with respect, or sacred in that not one word could be changed?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sacred in that it should be treated with respect, or sacred in that not one word could be changed?</p>
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		<title>By: BernardL</title>
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		<dc:creator>BernardL</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Oct 2008 15:33:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s what I meant. It sounds as if you have a good instructor. She knows the mechanics very well, and has fun teaching the subject. I had a professor at Cal State who thought every line of every poem was somehow sacred.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s what I meant. It sounds as if you have a good instructor. She knows the mechanics very well, and has fun teaching the subject. I had a professor at Cal State who thought every line of every poem was somehow sacred.</p>
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		<title>By: Beth Partin</title>
		<link>http://bethpartin.com/monhaibun-teacher/comment-page-1/#comment-175</link>
		<dc:creator>Beth Partin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Oct 2008 02:50:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The word &quot;humorless&quot; definitely doesn&#039;t apply to Dorianne Laux. She was great fun to be around, and even though her comments were quite blunt, they were delivered in a caring fashion (at least I thought so). It also helped that she didn&#039;t really seem to have any favorites among the poems--she found something to improve in all of them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The word &#8220;humorless&#8221; definitely doesn&#8217;t apply to Dorianne Laux. She was great fun to be around, and even though her comments were quite blunt, they were delivered in a caring fashion (at least I thought so). It also helped that she didn&#8217;t really seem to have any favorites among the poems&#8211;she found something to improve in all of them.</p>
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		<title>By: BernardL</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Oct 2008 00:54:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I would imagine teaching poetry to be one of the most difficult of all faculty assignments. I&#039;ve noticed people with a good basic knowledge of poetry mechanics and rhyme have a fun time with it; but the ones who write free form poetry use it like a weapon or statement, and are humorless when asked to explain their work. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would imagine teaching poetry to be one of the most difficult of all faculty assignments. I&#8217;ve noticed people with a good basic knowledge of poetry mechanics and rhyme have a fun time with it; but the ones who write free form poetry use it like a weapon or statement, and are humorless when asked to explain their work. <img src='http://bethpartin.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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